Could someone post an example of a design submission please?

Jaxeus

Preferably for a masterwork weapon.
I'm just not sure what needs to be included.

Thanks!

Aerotan

Item: Claymore  Type: Masterweapons  Org: Public
Commodities: steel 175 gold 75 ruby 50 sapphire 50 pearl 50 diamond 50
Mortal Reviews: Allowed
IMPORTANT: The main noun MUST use one of these: CLAYMORE, SWORD
Appearance:
a graceful claymore of the setting sun
Dropped:
Jutting from the ground here is a lengthy claymore, engraved with scenes of a setting sun.
Examined:
A metre and a half from steely tip to golden basket hilt, this claymore
is deeply decorated with gemstone scenes of a rubescent dusky sun
setting over a sparkling bay of sapphire and diamond. Miniature palm
trees sit upon the jewelled shoreline, while a pearl dolphin arcs out
over the waters. Possessed of a broad blade, the claymore is
single-edged unlike most claymores, yet seems no less imposing. Near the
crossguard, the slim fuller extends perhaps twenty centimetres from one
end to another.
Comments:


These are the basics in action. I'm assuming you were wanting this to submit a design through someone else, so you won't need the actual commands so much as the general requirements.
For most things, that's going to be:
+ An item type. This corresponds directly to the skill needed to make it.
+ A short appearance, which is how it shows up in inventories, attack descriptions, or ii, never starts with a capitol letter, and usually starts with "a" or "an" for weapons.
+ A dropped line, which is what folks see when it's on the ground. This should be a full sentence.
+ A list of commodities, these need to make sense.
+ An extended description, paragraph format.

All of the descriptions need to match up, and should describe the same object. This object needs to be of a given type, and must use the appropriate noun. For weapons, this means that, for example, rapiers need to include 'rapier' as part or all of the primary desctiption.


EDIT: can't fix the quote block, just removed it >.>

Xenthos

You carefully study a forging design.
Item: Bardiche  Type: Masterweapons  Org: Corvus  Designer: Another Shaddus Alt
Commodities: wood 370 steel 20 crowfeather 3 leather 7
Mortal Reviews: Allowed
IMPORTANT: The main noun MUST use one of these: BARDICHE
Appearance:
a ravenous crow-beaked bardiche
Dropped:
Resting on the ground here is a blackened bardiche carved with wyrden imagery.
Examined:
Two metres in length, this bardiche is composed of black oak and tipped
with a spade-like head in the shape of a swooping crow. The beak of the
enraged avian is gaping as if seeking to devour some morsel of prey, and
is honed razor-sharp in order to cut and tear. Below the head of the
polearm is a trio of crowfeathers, tied with a simple leather thong.
Feathers are carved along the shaft of the bardiche, resembling the
dangling crowfeathers above it and giving the weapon a textured grip as
well as a certain aesthetic appeal.
Comments:

Shaddus

Hey, that's my design >.>

Tridemon

Yes, Shaddus. You're everybody, remember?

Shaddus

Those are both my designs. /pride

Shaddus

(My designs are never amazing, but they're appealing. Kind of like me.)